I finally did it, I submitted a project to Spice Briefs for consideration the eHarlequin eBook only line.  Now I can sit around for the next 3 to 6 months second guessing what I should have wrote.  In the end I had my girlfriend edit the manuscript and add some of her prose to it.  Therefore I credit her with authorship as well.  I already know that I should have added more description about some of the people and events in the story.  At this point my hope is that they will at least provide me with some guidance on writing publishable erotica.  Here is a short excerpt:

Once she had him partially inserted she began to squat up and down, slowly working his cock deeper.  Her tight, pink pussy was so wet it was making a slippery suction noise each time she would raise her ass up off of his lap.  James took advantage of having her breasts in his face again and began to suck on them.  First sucking the left and rubbing on the right, then switching after a few moments.  Her nipples were so hard; he had sucked them until they felt like they would explode.  She could feel he was going to leave bruises on her, but she didn’t care, it felt so good.